Get Right into the Action!
1) AN ACTION - active verbs, figurative language, action! 

Joey
and Mary ran full steam ahead
across the corral and jumped
on the back of the wild stallion!
“I can’t wait to see the
Grand Canyon!” I shouted.
I wondered if we’d make it
out alive.
4) A SOUND - Grab the reader’s attention with
sound!
BOOM! Jack flinched as the thunder and
lightning rolled in over the hills.
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